WALT. draw a tool in the style of Jim dine

In my class we have been learning to draw a tool in the style of Jim dine. First we had to get a tool and draw it using charcoal. So here is my tool  that i drawled.

I thought it was alright and i like the charcoal.

How do you think i can in prove my art?????

walt take photos in different angles and views Today me and my friend che had to take some photos. first we had to take a close up photo of our faces. Then we had to do a wide shot so we did one of the field. Next we had to take a mid shot. then we had to do a over the shoulder shot and a worms eye view. after that we did a birds eye view.then when we finished we had to share it with our class and discuss using two stars and one wish. It was alright but we could have smiled in the photos.